Date:
19-09-03
To:
Kartavya / Abhi
cc:
Sanjeev
Subscription
Payment Form (II)
Yesterday
I sent you a draft form for your consideration.
Enclosed
find a second draft.
You
will notice that the extreme left-side column has been modified slightly.
It
became obvious to me that if the same form has to be used both for FIRST-TIME
Subscription as also for RENEWAL Subscription, then at the very
outset (right at the beginning), the customer must tell us what case ours is.
Form
should capture that info first, viz.:
☐ First Subscription
☐ Renewal Payment
Obvious
because, in case of Renewal of payment, only Transaction Fees are
to be considered.
There is no question of Activation Fee or of User License Fee.
Word
“Renewal” is somewhat misleading.
Here,
I am not talking of renewal of Annual User License.
(Incidentally,
will that require a separate online payment form?)
What
I had/have in mind is that I have received an email from RecruitGum server,
telling me that:
“Of
the Rs. 50,000/- Net Transaction Fees that you had paid
On
(date) ___________
Vide
(Cheque/DD) ___________
now,
balance left is Rs. 4,394/- (i.e. less than 10% of original last payment).”
We
are sure you have been happy using services of RecruitGum and would want
to continue using it without interruption.
In that case, to enable us to continue serving you, we request you to deposit
some further amount (towards Net Transaction Fees) by clicking here.
So,
may be, we should change from
“Renewal”
→ “Additional Transaction Fee Payment.” ⭕
By
clicking on this email I come to
“SUBSCRIPTION
PAYMENT FORM”
where
I click on
Additional
Transaction Fee Payment ⭕
and
next, enter my User ID / Password & click Submit.
The
moment I Submit, two things should happen, viz.:
#1
My customer data appears in the left column
(→
picked up from Free Trial Registration / Customer Database).
I
have an option to edit.
#2
The top portion of the right-hand column changes, as shown in enclosed (draft).
Draft
II
Obviously,
since client has chosen
Add.
Transaction Fee Payment ⭕
mode,
there is no need to show him/display:
- Activation
Fee
- User
Fee
- etc.
etc.
So,
this corner can conveniently display:
“Your
Account Credit Balance (for Renewals)”
So
that he gets to know:
→
What amount he had credited last time, and when (date).
(Net
Transaction Value only)
→
How much of that he has used up till today?
→
How much is balance as of today?
Now,
knowing that he used up Rs. 40,000/- in 4 weeks
(by
way of Transaction Fees) —
{
or whatever }
He
can decide whether to make a further deposit of
Rs.
10,000/- or Rs. 5 lakhs.
Thus,
a better design of the right-hand top corner, in some clever way, our
form/software should highlight the speed / rate at which he is using up
his credit:
Rs/day or Rs/week
→ Your Average Usage (Transaction Fees)
This
is much like looking at your fuel gauge and mentally computing that
“Now
I have enough fuel left for just 5 km!”
And
then (even better) —
When
I fill up 40 litres of petrol, if the counter gets reset and shows me that “Now
I can go 400 km!”
Here,
in our case, we (i.e. software)…
…should
announce:
“Thank
you for your fresh deposit of Rs. 2 lakh!
At
your current rate of usage, this amount should suffice for next 7.3 weeks.”
⊕ Current Usage = Rupee
value of transaction-fee consumed during last 7 days (1 week).
I
am myself not happy with the way I have re-designed right-hand top corner, but
I am sure you can do a much better job.
(signature
mark at bottom)
Date:
18-09-03
To:
Kartavya / Abhi
cc:
Sanjeev
Subscription
Payment Form
Enclosed
find my suggestion/proposal.
Points
to be noted / considered:
- I
am presuming that a customer would have first filled up FREE
TRIAL registration form before wanting to fill up this form.
- That
means:
- He
has already given us his company details.
- We
have issued him:
- →
User ID
- →
Password
- →
Customer No.
- I
am again presuming that before coming to this form, the customer has
already logged-in first, so we know who he is.
- That
would enable software to pick up data from his FREE TRIAL form and
automatically display it in the left-hand portion —
- “Subscription
Payment Form.”
Extreme right portion of the form is designed
to be used by customer, as a kind of
WORK-SHEET
(Rough Calculations).
He
can keep changing the figures that he enters into the second column from right.
As soon as he enters any figure in this column, software computes &
displays value in the last column.
This helps him arrive at the overall amount that he will need to remit.
Of
course, somewhere (Tool-Tip), we must make it amply clear that:
“Individual
Estimated Monthly Usage figures and values appearing in last column do NOT
bind/restrict him from using any one transaction more than any other
transaction less than the figures indicated by him.
Provision for individual numbers/values is only for his guidance — to arrive at
overall remittance figure.”
I also wish to plant an idea into the mind of
the customer that he need not figure out estimate of only monthly usage
figs of transactions.
Date:
18-09-03
This
is a very important (subliminal selling!).
We
do NOT wish to frighten him with ANNUAL figures which may add up
to Lakhs of rupees!
Then he will run away!
We
want to purposely “play down” the remittance amount (in the first instance) so
that it looks quite small!
It must look insignificant in comparison with what Monster / Naukri / JobsAhead
etc. charge at one go, right in the beginning of the year.
- Can
the same form be used for repeat subscriptions (maybe once every
month)?
Somehow we must ensure this usage (repeat usage). - Sanjeev
should check out this form’s usage (both first-time + repeat) with a few
HR Managers besides asking Ashutosh (3P as a subscriber) to test
it.
(signature
mark at bottom)
18/09/03











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